Syntax Literate: Jurnal Ilmiah
Indonesia p�ISSN: 2541-0849 e-ISSN: 2548-1398
Vol. 8, No. 8, Agustus
2023
COMMUNICATION
SKILL-BASED WRITING INSTRUCTION (CSBWI) TO PROMOTE EXTROVERT STUDENTS IN
WRITING
Vike Aprilianin Marwintaria Saputri1,
Ayu Andriyaningsih2, Widiyanto3, Wistina Seneru4,
Rapiadi5
1345Buddhist Communication Science Department,
STIAB Jinarakkhita, Lampung, Indonesia
2Buddhist Education Department, STIAB
Jinarakkhita, Lampung, Indonesia
E-mail: [email protected],
[email protected], [email protected],
[email protected], [email protected]
Abstract
This study aims to discover the relationship between
extrovert students' and their writing ability at the university level. The
study was conducted from March to April 2023 at the Jinarakkhita Buddhist
College Bandar Lampung. The population of the research was the second-semester
Buddhist Education Department students in the academic year 2022-2023. The
researchers used a rubric score to analyze and measure the students' recount
text writing ability before and after treatment. The data were collected by
administering essay writing pre-tests and post-tests. The data were collected
from a writing test used to assess students' writing abilities, and a series of
analyses were performed, beginning with examining the reliability of the
questionnaire and the association between the score and students'
personalities. The result showed increased pre-test and post-test average
scores from 49.9 to 65.1. In addition, this study found that second-semester
students' writing abilities have improved due to the use of communication
skill-based writing instruction (CSBWI) to promote extrovert students' as they
are more expressive in conducting ideas.
Keywords: Communication Skill; Extrovert Students; Writing
Instruction; Writing Ability.
Introduction
English communication skill is crucial for everyone
living in this globalization era to compete with others since English is used
as a tool of communication internationally. The use of English as an
international language has connected several people all over the world. This
brings consequences for English language learners to develop their social and
professional communication skills. The development of language skills affects a
person's productive ability. Furthermore, English has played an essential role
in various aspects such as business, education, science, technology, media,
etc. Especially in education, English is taught and studied at every level of
education, from kindergarten to university (Nabila
& Wibowo, 2022). Ayu and Indrawati
(2019) stated that English has been
considered a foreign language in Indonesia.
Listening, speaking, reading, and writing are the
four communication skills in English. Communication skills are essential and
teachable. When sharing and receiving various types of information,
communication skills are used. A clear, effective, and efficient communication
style is an exceptional and valuable skill, even though these skills may be a
regular part of your day-to-day job life. Communication enables us to connect
with people, share our experiences and needs, and strengthen our bonds in daily
life. It allows us to communicate our views, share information, and express our
emotions. To understand information more properly and rapidly, you and others
must have practical communication skills.
On the other hand, effective communication
techniques result in frequent misunderstandings and satisfaction. There are
five types of communication skills: verbal communication, non-verbal
communication, written communication, listening, and visual communication. In
this case, the researchers choose written communication because the extent to
which a student can demonstrate their academic ability is heavily reliant on
their ability to express themselves in written communication. Therefore,
writing is one of the skills in English that must be learned by language
learners, besides listening, speaking, and reading. In the EFL classroom, the
students wish to learn writing as an essential component of learning and apply
it to their academic and professional lives (Zaswita
& Ihsan, 2020).
Writing is one of four parts of competence that has
become an essential factor in the fundamental study of English (Maulida
et al., 2022). Rao (2019) says that writing is seen as the
most challenging of the four skills and requires more time practising it. It
has been shown that most students need help to differentiate the form of a
paragraph in writing and get the main idea, the topic sentence, the supporting
sentences, and the concluding sentence. As a result, they have obtained a low
score in writing. Writing English skills is one way to improve the quality of
the country. Rajesh (2017) argues that writing skills are a
way to express one's thinking and feelings on paper.
That is why every text in medicine, engineering, and
international education primarily uses English as their language. In other
words, writing skills are becoming an essential subject for students to study.
Writing activities are one strategy for encouraging and developing this skill
in a fun way. Emails, texts, and other written correspondence are examples of
written communication. Written communication entails expressing yourself
clearly, using precise language, constructing a logical argument, taking notes,
editing and summarizing, and writing reports.
In practice, no one student can excel at every
language skill. Every student had different levels of their proficiency.
However, many factors can affect student achievement, especially in writing.
These factors can come from teachers and students. Seen from the teacher's
point of view, several factors can affect students' writing skills, such as
teacher quality, teaching methods and performance. From the student side,
motivation, life background, the environment where students live, and student
personality can influence their achievement. In this case, the researcher
focuses on the personality factor.
Personality is one of the concepts in psychological
science that is very important and is the key to the success or failure of
students in undergoing academic activities both at the elementary school and at
the university level (Hakimi
et al., 2011);(Prakash
et al., 2016). Personality is included in the
psychological internal factors that significantly predict cognitive performance
and influence academic success. Dealing with students' personalities, there are
two types of personalities studied here: extrovert and introvert because these
two types are the most researched personality aspects in L2 (second language)
studies. Personality types (extrovert introvert) and learning English are
interrelated (Husain
& Ibrahim, 2018). They have different styles of
learning English, such as listening, speaking, reading, and writing.
In language learning, extroverted and introverted
students also have their strengths and weaknesses. Loewen (2007) States that extroversion can
affect second language learning because extroverts are more likely to look for
opportunities to interact with other speakers of the second language.
Conversely, introverts may have fewer interaction opportunities because of their
personality types. Pritchard, (2017) recognizes that extrovert
students like talking to understand new information and ideas, working in
groups, trying something first and thinking later.
Extroverts learn best when working with friends and
learning by trying something themselves instead of watching or listening to
others. When they have difficulty understanding, they can discuss their ideas.
Meanwhile, introverted students like self-study, listening to others talk and
thinking about information in private, thinking about something first and
trying later, listening, observing, writing and reading, and taking time to
complete the task. Introverts do well when they can find quiet places to work
and have enough time to reflect, reformulate, and improve their work.
Introverts often connect schoolwork and their interests. Zafar, (2012) proposed that the introverted
students in the class can also be involved in language learning if teachers
provide their students with a sense of security and encourage them to voice
their opinions. Once the students are not afraid of being blamed and humiliated
when they talk, they will take part in the class willingly and do well in
second language acquisition.
Personality is considered one of the internal
factors that have an impact on students' ability in language learning.
Moreover, in terms of writing ability, some researchers find that there are
also differences between extrovert personality and introvert personality (Zaswita
& Ihsan, 2020). Marwa, (2016) They obtained a positive
correlation between extroversion personality and students' argumentative essay
writing skills. In the contrary, a study conducted by Zainuddin (2016) found that introvert EFL
learners did better than extrovert EFL learners in constructing sentences
(syntax). Boroujeni, (2015) lso
gained if introverts significantly outperformed extroverts in all subsets of
writing components except organization.
This may be due to some of the introverts'
characteristics that the extroverts lack, such as being careful, having more
concentration in their solitude, and the ability to generate many more ideas.
Therefore, the present study focused on how communication skill-based writing
instruction can promote extrovert students' writing ability, especially in
writing a recount text, as one of the writing materials learned in the second
semester of the Buddhist Education Department. Then, related to the background
of the abovementioned problem, the problem formulation is "How is the
extrovert students' ability in the writing classroom?"
Research Methods
In
this research, the researcher uses a quantitative approach to conduct this
research. Apuke (2017) stated that quantitative research is the study that deals
with quantifying and analyzing variables to get results. The researcher tried
to find the relationship between students' personalities and writing abilities.
The population of the research was the second-semester Buddhist Education
Department students in the academic year 2022-2023. The sample consists of 23
students. The research was conducted from March to April 2023 in the
Jinarakkhita Buddhist College Bandar Lampung. The instrument used was in the
form of a questionnaire, which was distributed online using Google Forms.
The
questionnaire distributed to the participants consists of 30 questions. The
questionnaire was developed and divided into two main sections. The first
section consists of 16 questions for extroverts, and the second consists of 14
questions for introverts. Both sections use five 5-point Likert Scale ranging
from strongly disagree, disagree, neutral, agree, to strongly agree, which
requires the respondents to indicate a degree of agreement or disagreement with
a series of statements related to the stimulus. In analyzing the data, the
researchers used SPSS version 25. Then, a series of analyses was conducted,
starting from analyzing the questionnaire's reliability and the correlation
between the score and students' personality. The data is derived from a writing
test used to assess students' writing abilities before and after treatment�the
Repeated Measures T-test was used to compare the means of the pre-test and
post-test scores.
Results and Discussion
A. Students� Personality
This section aimed to
explain the findings of the current study, which was based on the research
questions. This research question focused on communication skill-based
instruction to promote extrovert students' writing ability. This study aims to
uncover the relationship between extrovert students' and their writing ability
at the university level. To answer this research question, the researcher has
determined the characteristics of respondents based on gender. The
characteristic of respondent based on gender is presented in the following
table.
Table
1 Characteristics of Respondents Based on Gender
Gender |
N |
% |
Male |
11 |
47% |
Female |
13 |
53% |
Total |
23 |
100% |
The table above shows
that of 23 respondents, 11 (47%) are male students, and 13 (53%) are female
students. Furthermore, the researcher used the instrument adopted from the
Eysenk Personality Questionnaire that incorporates 30 items: 16 for extroverts
and 14 for introverts.
�
Table
2 Descriptive Statistics of Extroverts
The questionnaire contains seven
indicators: activity, sociability, risk-taking, impulsiveness, expressiveness,
reflectiveness, and responsibility. Eysenck (1985), as cited in Wulandari (2017), provided the criteria for each
indicator. According to the first indicator, extroverts are said to be active
and enjoy physical activities like doing things quickly and different kinds of
tasks. Extroverts enjoy pursuing a variety of interests. They enjoy
participating in social gatherings such as parties. They get along well with
others and can easily befriend them.
According to the risk-taking
indicator, extroverts enjoy challenging activities and are unconcerned about
the consequences. Extroverts, as previously stated, are impulsive; they make
snap decisions. In expressiveness, they tend to be more accessible in expressing
their feelings, reserved and patient. They are stubborn and prefer to act
rather than think, according to reflectiveness. According to the responsibility
indicator, extroverts are likely to be careless, unpredictable, and fancy-free.
Moving on to the next section, the table below explains the questionnaire for
the introverted side.
Table
3 Descriptive Statistics of Introverts
In terms of activity,
introverts tend to be passive, sluggish, and easily exhausted. They prefer to
keep their circle of friends as small as possible while maintaining a solid
bond. As a result, they have difficulty making friends and opening up to
others. They fear taking risks because they prefer familiarity, safety, and
security. Introverts, unlike extroverts, do not act on the spur of the moment.
They make their decision after much thought and consideration. They usually
plan ahead of time and think before speaking or acting. Introverts are more
sentimental, tenderhearted, labile, and emotional in their expression.
Introverts have a theoretical mindset and prefer to be immersed in ideas and
introspection regarding reflectiveness. Regarding responsibility indicators,
they are likely to be dependable, trustworthy, and conscientious.
The above
questionnaires were converted from yes/no questions to a 5-point Likert Scale.
Participants must complete the questionnaire by marking each question to
indicate their level of agreement, disagreement, or neither, with strongly
disagree having a value of 1, disagree 2, neutral 3, agree 4, and strongly
agree 5. Only the extrovert questionnaire used this scale. The scale for the
introvert questionnaire, on the other hand, was reversed, with strongly agree
to have a value of 1, agree 2, neutral 3, disagree 4, and strongly disagree 5.
As a result, the higher the score, the more outgoing the students. Following
data collection, the researchers classified each student as an extrovert or an
introvert using the score interpretation criteria outlined below.
Table
4 The Interpretation Table of Characteristic
Score |
Interpretation |
31 � 90 |
Introvert |
91 - 150 |
Extrovert |
According to the table
above, students who scored 31-90 are introverts, while students who scored
91-150 are extroverts. Because students must complete the entire questionnaire,
the smallest data value that can be entered into the class (lower-class limit)
is 30, and the most significant data value that can be entered into the class
(upper-class limit) is 150. However, the researchers did not decide to include
the lower-class limit, so the range for both classes will be the same, which is
60. Table 5 below identifies the students' personalities based on the
interpretation above.
Table
5 The Item Interpretation of Students� Characteristics
Characteristic |
N |
% |
Introvert |
2 |
9% |
Extrovert |
21 |
91% |
Total |
23 |
100% |
As a result, 2 (9%) students are classified
as introverts, while 21 (91%) are classified as extroverts. This revealed that
most students in the Buddhist Education Department at Jinarakkhita Buddhist
College Lampung, specifically the second-semester students who comprised the
sample, are extroverts.
B. The Extrovert Students�
Writing Ability
This subsection
answered the research question, "How is the extrovert students' writing
ability in the writing classroom?". Data were gathered to answer this
research question by administering pre-and post-tests of essay writing.
Inter-rating was used for test reliability, which involved the researchers and
one of the English lecturers at Jinarakkhita Buddhist College Lampung.
The researcher used a
rubric score in this study to analyze and measure the students' recount text
writing ability. In this case, the researcher used the J.B. Heaton (1983) rubric score because it was
appropriate for this research to determine students' recount text writing
ability. J.B. Heaton's rubric score included content, organization, vocabulary,
language use, and mechanics.
�The scores from the two inter-raters in this
study were combined, and these were the final and average scores. The highest
final score on the writing pre-test was 65, and the lowest final score was 38.
The researcher had not given any treatments to the students at the time. As a
result, it was unsurprising that their score still needed to be higher. The
students worked for ninety minutes on the writing pre-test. The students wrote
what they knew based on their experiences over the semester. They did, however,
need to pay attention to the instructions in the pre-test paper provided by the
researcher.
In this type of
situation, the students struggled because they had assumed that writing was a
difficult and tedious subject. They were unsure how to begin writing something.
Although the students had many ideas to write about, they needed help
organizing their thoughts and choosing adequate words/idioms. Aside from that,
the students needed help understanding the tenses used. Even with the
mechanics' issues, they were still irregular. However, they continued to try to
write down what they knew in this pre-test section.
While in the pre-test,
the students completed their task on writing. The students' writing pre-test
results for each aspect of writing were as follows: content 15.4, organization
11.1, vocabulary 10.2, language use 10.6, and mechanics 2.5. Inter-rating was
used in scoring the students' writing post-test, just as it was in scoring the
writing pre-test. The results were as follows: the highest final score of the
writing post-test was 73, and the lowest final score was 57. The researcher had
given the students treatments based on communication skill-based writing
instruction. They completed the writing post-test in ninety minutes. The
students also used all of the steps in the writing process. These are
pre-writing, drafting, revising, editing, and publishing:
Table
6 Stage of The Writing Process
No. |
Stages of The Writing Process |
1. |
Stage
1: Pre � Writing a.
Students choose a topic. b.
Students
gather ideas. 1.
Brainstorming
(diagram (clustering) or randomly listing ideas) 2.
Reading 3.
Interviewing
c.
Students organize ideas. d.
Students
define a topic sentence. e.
Students write an outline for their writing. |
2. |
Stage
2: Drafting a.
Students write a rough draft. b.
Students emphasize content rather than mechanics. |
3. |
Stage
3: Revising a.
Students re�read their writing. b.
Students
share their writing with the teacher. c.
Students
participate constructively in discussions about their writing with the
teacher. d.
Students change their compositions to reflect the reactions and
comments of the teacher. Besides that, students make substantive rather than
only minor changes. |
4. |
Stage
4: Editing a.
Students proofread their writing. b.
Students increasingly identify and correct their mechanical errors. |
5. |
Stage
5: Publishing a.
Students make the final copy of their writing. b.
Students
publish their writing in appropriate forms. c.
Students share their finished writing with the teacher. |
Finally, the students
completed their post-test on writing. The following were the results of the
students' writing post-tests: content 19.1, organization 16.1, vocabulary 13.1,
language use 13.5, and mechanics 3.0. Furthermore, comparing the average scores
of the pre-test and post-test, students' writing ability improved from 49.9 to
65.1. As a result, there was a 15.2% improvement. The result was as follows:
Table
7 The Students� Writing Improvement Paired Samples Statistic
|
Mean |
N |
Std. Deviation |
Std. Error
Mean |
Pair1Writing_Pretest ������������ Writing_Posttest |
49.9000 65.1000 |
23 23 |
6.19001 3.46353 |
1.29071 0.72220 |
The t-test was used to
determine whether the improvement was significant or not. The result was as
follows:
Table
8 Paired Samples Test
|
Paired
Differences |
T |
df |
Sig.(2-tailed) |
||||
Mean |
Std.Deviation |
Std. Error
Mean |
95%
Confidence Interval of the Difference |
|||||
Lower |
Upper |
|||||||
Pair1
Posttest-Pretest |
25.82609 |
7.81404 |
1.62934 |
22.44704 |
29.20513 |
15.851 |
22 |
.000 |
The researcher
compared the t-value to the t-table using the table above. The t-value in this
case was 15.851, while the t-table was 2.074. If t-value > t-table, the
current study's result was significant. This could imply that communication
skill-based writing instruction could significantly improve extrovert students'
writing abilities over traditional methods. The table above shows a significant
difference in the students' writing pre-test and post-test scores.
According to the
Paired Sample T-Test, the treatment significantly impacted the students'
scores, as indicated by the sig. (2-tailed) value of .000. Furthermore, with a
mean score of 5.0, the treatment had the most significant positive impact on
the "organization" aspect of writing. This part explained how
communication skill-based writing instruction promotes students' writing
ability in the writing classroom.
C. Communication Skill-Based
Writing Instruction and Students� Writing Ability
Communication
skill-based writing instruction in the classroom was a process in which a
teacher provided students with a temporary framework for learning. Students
were encouraged to develop their creativity, motivation, and resourcefulness
when correct communication skill-based writing instruction was done.
Communication skill-based writing instruction occurs during the stages of
instruction in the context of teaching writing. Teaching writing, on the other
hand, allows students to observe the writing process. The researcher attempts
to incorporate communication skills into the writing process in this study. To
combine those two things, the researcher will use the five stages of the
writing process, as cited in Faraj (2015). The procedure of communication
skill-based writing instruction is as follows.
Students focus on the
text type. In this case, the text type is recount text; (1) Students discuss
the social function or purpose of the recount text. (2) Students discuss the
schematic structure of the recount text. (3) Students discuss the language
features of the recount text. (4) Students choose a topic. (5) Students gather
ideas. (6) Students explore cultural similarities and differences in the topic
or ideas. (7) Students organize ideas. (8) Students define a topic sentence.
(9) Students practice grammatical patterns relevant to the recount text. (10) Students
build and extend vocabulary relevant to the recount text. (11) Students and
teacher work together to construct a recount text. (12) The teacher provides
guidance and support to the students. (13) Students write an outline for their
writing. (14) Students write a rough draft. (15) Students re�read their
writing. (16) Students proofread their writing. (17) Students increasingly
identify and correct their mechanical errors. (18) Students pay attention to
the aspects of writing, such as content, organization, vocabulary, language
use, and mechanics. (19) Students share their writing with the teacher. (20) Students
participate constructively in discussions about their writing with the teacher.
(21) Students incorporate knowledge of the schematic structure and grammatical
features from their teacher into their writing. (22) Students make changes in
their compositions to reflect the reactions and comments of the teacher.
Besides that, students make substantive rather than only minor changes. (23) Students
produce the final copy of their writing. (24) Students publish their writing in
appropriate forms. (25) Students share their finished writing with the teacher.
(26) Students feel confident and comfortable writing a recount text in writing
class. Moreover, it happens in a context outside the classroom.
As a result, the
current study found that communication skill-based writing instruction aided
students' writing processes. In this case, the students stated that
communication skill-based writing instruction enabled them to communicate their
ideas in written form, after which they could edit their work. They then
published their work in appropriate formats. In other words, the student's
writing skills could improve in content, organization, vocabulary, language
use, and mechanics. They also wrote a recount text in and outside the writing
class, and the students felt confident and at ease.
Conclusion
Following
the previous section's analysis of the data obtained during the research, the
findings, and the outcome of this current study, the researcher comes to the
following conclusions: The first was the implementation of communication
skill-based writing instruction in the second-semester students at Jinarakkhita
Buddhist College Lampung which resulted in improvements in the extrovert
students' writing ability due to they tend to be more expressive in
constructing the idea and find something interestingly and creatively. In this
case, students who previously struggled to write now have a growing
understanding of how to gather and confidently use information in their
writing.
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